First draft of my contents page :)

I am quite happy with my contents page there are just a few things that i feel would benefit if i changed i think the two pictures on the contents page could be better editied and also i feel that the editors comment draws to much attention away from the main contents page. Also the name of the magazine is not at the top of the page which doesn't create a strong brand identity.  The last thing that i would like to change the main article is not advertised on the contents page and that should be one of the main things as that is what i am using to get people to buy my magazine.